I like how you're advancing at least two parallel story lines in this series, the Blair/Taylor feud coming more and more into focus in what seemed to be a mostly Eve/Shyla drama with some side stories in between.

Having Eve lose wasn't a twist something I was expecting, seeing her record so far. While I understand you're building a grudge, I don't think it'd be the worst thing if at some point one (or several) of the apparent "main" protagonists got tossed aside and have the story go in a different direction mid way.

Keep up the good work.